Research: Feedback on the introduction task

Before the summer holidays we were to make a presentation showing the intertwining links throughout media over one subject genre. I chose to do mine on 'The Fault In Our Stars' and the media links I chose were teaser trailer, posters and magazine covers.

Here is the feedback I got from my teacher Miss Humpleby and my class:

A lot of the feedback was positive, the constructive criticism that I was given was to add more visuals to my presentation, and consider breaking up the text I had written on each slide of the presentation into smaller chunks as there was too much on each slide for the audience read, meaning they weren't able to read through it all before I had moved on to the slide.